Sarah's Drawings
Major Argument: Get people, primarily those in music,
interested in the campus acapella group, Vocal Achord
Strengths: The drawings are AWESOME! I immediately get the
impression that you care deeply about this group, and are looking to help them
with publicity.
Things to develop: Let us know which one wins the vote, they
both look very nice but could use colors.
James' Anti-Piracy photo
Major Argument: Online piracy hurts the economy, and needs
to be stopped.
Strengths: Many interesting facts, good use of images, color
choice emphasizes key information
Things to develop: Utilize space at bottom to clarify
argument, give facts on how many individuals are convicted on charges of
piracy.
Casandra's Prezi
Major Argument: Greek Life is a great opportunity to gain
experience in leadership as well as meeting new people.
Strengths: Interesting system of transitions, fun to watch
and keeps the audience focused
Things to develop: Slow the speed down a little, try thicker
text to help your audience read the information
No comments:
Post a Comment