Class Presentations Take 2

Julia

Argument: Horoscopes and astrology can be disproven by science, so they may not always be accurate.

Strengths: Lots of information, interesting topic, good choice of medium,

Things to Develop: More pictures or something to break up information sections

Meridith

Argument: Photo manipulations can be difficult to spot from an original photo

Strengths: Photos are well-edited, it is very difficult to pick the original photo

Things to Develop: Make the argument stronger (text will help with that), pick a specific side and make an argument for that

Olive

Argument: There are many distinguishing attractions for states, get out and sight-see

Strengths: Good use of images, very interesting medium,

Things to Develop: Make a clear argument (maybe use a slogan like “Get Out and Explore!” or something)

Kim

Argument: Advertising for UP Unique Creations

Strengths: Good layout, products are advertised well, website seems to flow nicely

Things to Develop: Add a “favorite items” page, give a purpose for the site (where do the funds go?)

Katelyn

Argument: There is more to a political candidate than just their stage appearance and policies

Strengths: Good examples, makes an overall neutral statement, good layout

Things to Develop: Mix up sentences (try not to start with “Did you know…” every time), specify if the claims are from the general public or just one person’s opinion

Courtney

Argument: Participate in NaNoWriMo and write a 50,000 word novel

Strengths: Good contrast, interesting topic, good information, sense of completion as you read on

Things to Develop: Past examples of success? Adding in a picture or two would help break up the information

Devin

Argument: Eating off campus is less expensive, and gives you more choices.

Strengths: Photos look good, cost analysis is interesting, dining hall information is thorough

Things to Develop: An info graphic of the survey results would definitely help your argument

Hannah

Argument: Support Hannah’s sister and her blog

Strengths: Very calm layout, seems like a good start for a blog

Things to Develop: Make the argument clear, more posts would be good

(Millenniums Video)

Argument: Our generation has had many media influences that continue to affect our skills and how we chose to use them today.

Strengths: Interesting and fun to watch movie, easy to relate to,

Things to Develop: Figure out the sound

Jana

Argument: Use Halonen Landscaping for your lawn care

Strengths: Basic, gets the reader’s attention

Things to Develop: More color could help contrast the information